Real example of humanizing AI

Showing is better than telling. Here's a real example from yesterday:

AI-generated original: "In today's competitive landscape, businesses must leverage cutting-edge technology to streamline operations and drive growth. It is crucial to embrace digital transformation to remain relevant."

After humanizing: "Here's the thing about tech in business, you either figure it out or get left behind. Not because some consultant said so, but because your competitors aren't waiting around."

Same core idea. Completely different vibe. Easy new blog post.

What I changed:

• Killed the buzzwords

• Made it conversational

• Added mild opinion/attitude

• Shortened dramatically

• Used contractions
  

The original says nothing while trying to sound smart. The rewrite takes a stance.